Daughter

“Son,” they called him,
but never a daughter for her.
Her name, overused, while
her bare feet danced
in the dirt—soles hardened
for meals on the table,
hands as coarse as the rugged
pavement of the path
she never crossed.
Her world, as small
as the eggs she fried,
mouths to feed.
A flicker of joy
when the kettle rang.
A little nervous
at the pitter-patter.
Mad, a bit,
when the harvest was late.
A little of everything,
for every milieu.

And at night, she knelt
till numbness hugged her kneecaps.
“Father, Son, …,”
and that made you wonder—
what would she think
if you told her
there’s a mother, too,
and placed in her hands
a stereorama, a glimpse
of a world she never knew?
Would she sigh with relief,
tremble in fear,
or move to run
the rugged path?
Yet we both knew
how slim the chance was—
her feet, rooted,
fertilized with mundanity.
Her head bloomed underground,
no space for stars.


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3 responses to “Daughter”

  1. Your craft seems to be evolving, becoming broader. I’d like to due a deep dive somewhere that’s convenient, maybe as read the. 2 or 3 I’ve written, apparently in the same time frame. Cheers!

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  2. oh! I’d forgotten you were here as well. I had dropped by to make sure my “torn words” bloggy-thing was entirely dismantled (it wasn’t) while half thinking I might activate it again (I may). After that I decided to give the daily prompt feature a try. I sent the contents before titling it. It should be called “The Little Match Girl” in homage to a Manga Allison did ripping on the original tale. Then I wanted to check dmseay’s serial I followed here and some FB sight. Just below him was your distinctive badge. Cool! See you about!

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  3. The secret to Allison’s Spectacle’s is that the Social Blocks are not Secure. Each of those Three Blocks need to have the numbers reversed. For instance, the first block might read as ABCD, but should be changed to DCBA to present the entry correctly. Let me know if that works by revealing the three proper blocks to me somewhere, maybe Pestistrest.

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